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hotsnakes running politian
Number of posts : 720 Age : 30 Location : Florida. Job/Hobbies : lacrosse. guitar. Humour : omg i lisen 2 devil wers prada so kul so hardcor Svartikins : wat Points : Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-10
Me! Class: ballin station wagon Weapon: ballin skills Mount: kilimanjaro
| Subject: live fast die young Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:47 pm | |
| it's finished, i'm about 10% done with lyrics. i added better sweeps and an acoustic end section.
svart and eifion, ill post it tomorrow so you can see it. | |
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hotsnakes running politian
Number of posts : 720 Age : 30 Location : Florida. Job/Hobbies : lacrosse. guitar. Humour : omg i lisen 2 devil wers prada so kul so hardcor Svartikins : wat Points : Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-10
Me! Class: ballin station wagon Weapon: ballin skills Mount: kilimanjaro
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:24 pm | |
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Gear Me Up hey dude what're you doing in my break room
Number of posts : 2254 Age : 31 Location : An Ash concert :'( Job/Hobbies : rollerblades Humour : funny Svartikins : and Points : Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2007-09-08
Me! Class: Elvis Impersonator Weapon: Harpoon Mount: broom broom car
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Tue Dec 04, 2007 9:33 am | |
| Get rid of the abysmal thrash rhythm guitar.
Then I'll take you seriously. | |
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hotsnakes running politian
Number of posts : 720 Age : 30 Location : Florida. Job/Hobbies : lacrosse. guitar. Humour : omg i lisen 2 devil wers prada so kul so hardcor Svartikins : wat Points : Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-10
Me! Class: ballin station wagon Weapon: ballin skills Mount: kilimanjaro
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Tue Dec 04, 2007 12:50 pm | |
| - Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- Get rid of the abysmal thrash rhythm guitar.
Then I'll take you seriously. come on. it's my first full attempt at a song. besides, i thought you liked thrash *megadeth* btw, define thrash, because my next riff i plan to use is kinda holy wars/sleepwalker - ish. | |
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Gear Me Up hey dude what're you doing in my break room
Number of posts : 2254 Age : 31 Location : An Ash concert :'( Job/Hobbies : rollerblades Humour : funny Svartikins : and Points : Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2007-09-08
Me! Class: Elvis Impersonator Weapon: Harpoon Mount: broom broom car
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:03 pm | |
| - hotsnakes wrote:
- Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- Get rid of the abysmal thrash rhythm guitar.
Then I'll take you seriously. come on. it's my first full attempt at a song.
besides, i thought you liked thrash *megadeth*
btw, define thrash, because my next riff i plan to use is kinda holy wars/sleepwalker - ish. I wouldn't consider Megadeth thrash. They know how to slow down, have those awesome harmonies and stuff. What I mean is... lazy-ass-straight-rhythm-backbone-riffs. Chuggers. | |
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hotsnakes running politian
Number of posts : 720 Age : 30 Location : Florida. Job/Hobbies : lacrosse. guitar. Humour : omg i lisen 2 devil wers prada so kul so hardcor Svartikins : wat Points : Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-10
Me! Class: ballin station wagon Weapon: ballin skills Mount: kilimanjaro
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:04 pm | |
| - Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- hotsnakes wrote:
- Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- Get rid of the abysmal thrash rhythm guitar.
Then I'll take you seriously. come on. it's my first full attempt at a song.
besides, i thought you liked thrash *megadeth*
btw, define thrash, because my next riff i plan to use is kinda holy wars/sleepwalker - ish. I wouldn't consider Megadeth thrash.
They know how to slow down, have those awesome harmonies and stuff.
What I mean is... lazy-ass-straight-rhythm-backbone-riffs.
Chuggers. oh, i know what you mean. i know it's simple, but i dig it. i'm a beginner remember? anyway i'm trying to do some jazzy stuff, would you and svart care to join? it's pretty cool. it would be awesome if we did some santana/gambale/other jazz - type song. | |
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Svartman. alpha-numeric pimp
Number of posts : 1182 Age : 35 Location : Viva Italia, where the girls are hot. And the beaches are nude. (Until July 15th). Job/Hobbies : Webmaster. Humour : I hate you all. ALL. Points : Reputation : -1 Registration date : 2007-09-02
Me! Class: Webmaster Weapon: BANHAMMER! Mount: Mech Suit.
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Tue Dec 04, 2007 7:58 pm | |
| I'd say it's decent. The acoustic part doesn't match the metal part, and the solos are just pentatonic wankery. | |
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Ah, a Jinz oh hey eric clapton whatre you doing 1100 feet in the air
Number of posts : 2045 Age : 33 Svartikins : the Points : Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-11
Me! Class: Sweet Wizard with A Long Beard. Weapon: Groovy Magic Mount: A Tiny Storm Cloud
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Wed Dec 05, 2007 7:04 am | |
| For the most part, I enjoyed it.... The chords at the beginning sounded like it could be Runescape background music, lol. When it picks up at 14, I would say try to make a smoother transition, it sounds like it's an entirely new song with no repeating elements. Not sure what you want to do with the various gaps from 17 to 75. If you want me to write an interesting bass part, I can try it out. The strange trill solo thing from 55 - 58 might need a little work on your part. Or, it's perfect and GP makes it sound bad. I don't know for sure. The solo starting at 80 kind of sounded Highway Star-esque. That's not necessarily a bad thing You might want to check out some of the notes at 88, those triplets did not sound right... Same issue at 108 through 110. Some notes did not sound write with the chords. Again, it might just be the Guitar Pro sound. That's about it. If you want me to write a bass part, I can surely try it out. | |
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Gear Me Up hey dude what're you doing in my break room
Number of posts : 2254 Age : 31 Location : An Ash concert :'( Job/Hobbies : rollerblades Humour : funny Svartikins : and Points : Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2007-09-08
Me! Class: Elvis Impersonator Weapon: Harpoon Mount: broom broom car
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:28 am | |
| - hotsnakes wrote:
- Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- hotsnakes wrote:
- Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- Get rid of the abysmal thrash rhythm guitar.
Then I'll take you seriously. come on. it's my first full attempt at a song.
besides, i thought you liked thrash *megadeth*
btw, define thrash, because my next riff i plan to use is kinda holy wars/sleepwalker - ish. I wouldn't consider Megadeth thrash.
They know how to slow down, have those awesome harmonies and stuff.
What I mean is... lazy-ass-straight-rhythm-backbone-riffs.
Chuggers. oh, i know what you mean. i know it's simple, but i dig it. i'm a beginner remember?
anyway i'm trying to do some jazzy stuff, would you and svart care to join? it's pretty cool. it would be awesome if we did some santana/gambale/other jazz - type song. I'm game. | |
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Svartman. alpha-numeric pimp
Number of posts : 1182 Age : 35 Location : Viva Italia, where the girls are hot. And the beaches are nude. (Until July 15th). Job/Hobbies : Webmaster. Humour : I hate you all. ALL. Points : Reputation : -1 Registration date : 2007-09-02
Me! Class: Webmaster Weapon: BANHAMMER! Mount: Mech Suit.
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:32 am | |
| - Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- hotsnakes wrote:
- Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- hotsnakes wrote:
- Blue Öyster Man wrote:
- Get rid of the abysmal thrash rhythm guitar.
Then I'll take you seriously. come on. it's my first full attempt at a song.
besides, i thought you liked thrash *megadeth*
btw, define thrash, because my next riff i plan to use is kinda holy wars/sleepwalker - ish. I wouldn't consider Megadeth thrash.
They know how to slow down, have those awesome harmonies and stuff.
What I mean is... lazy-ass-straight-rhythm-backbone-riffs.
Chuggers. oh, i know what you mean. i know it's simple, but i dig it. i'm a beginner remember?
anyway i'm trying to do some jazzy stuff, would you and svart care to join? it's pretty cool. it would be awesome if we did some santana/gambale/other jazz - type song. I'm game. YAY! | |
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hotsnakes running politian
Number of posts : 720 Age : 30 Location : Florida. Job/Hobbies : lacrosse. guitar. Humour : omg i lisen 2 devil wers prada so kul so hardcor Svartikins : wat Points : Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-09-10
Me! Class: ballin station wagon Weapon: ballin skills Mount: kilimanjaro
| Subject: Re: live fast die young Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:33 pm | |
| sweet
we can be the best jazz trio ever | |
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