Final Wars

In the year 20XX The Russians used bacteria from crashed UFO to create multiple Bacterial Bombs. In an event known as "The Day of Reckoning", all of the bombs were launched and almost 99% of the population was killed and transformed into Braindead flesheaters or Powerful Mutant creatures. Ridge Darksaber is a Telokinetic super soilder and the last of his kind. He is the only surviving Telosoilder in the world. He is the leader of a small resistance attampting to defeat the world empire led by a powerfull, mercyless dictator.

Whats everyone think?

Ridge Darksaber is a bit of a gay name, but it seems pretty okay apart from that.

that really is a gay name, anyways since everybody is dead it would be really hard to care about the cause of the resistance, and who the *bleep* would the dictator dictate! *censor* zombies??!? anyways it seems like a big pile of ass, although, i know people who would read crap like this.

Russia isn't dead. He dictates Russia. Also, some places weren't hit by the bombs, so there are survivors. But there are lasers and zombies.

99% of the people were killed THEN transformed.Thus zombies or they all magically got unkilled then transformed .
also 99%

You're writing a NOVEL?

Need I remind you that you're 14?

that one person wrote The Outsiders at the age of 14.

wow.